Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Option One: Write one paragraph about a place or an event that has influenced who you are. Why is/was this place or event so important? How did it shape your morals or beliefs? Be sure you include a topic sentence, specific examples that support your topic sentence, and a final concluding sentence that wraps up your ideas.

I had been in the hospital a couple years ago and it had been the third time that I had been in the hospital in a 2 year span. It was important to me because it shaped my beliefs and who I am as a person. It shaped my beliefs in a way that it taught me to be thankful for every day that I have to live. In another way it taught me trust God witheverything that I have. In the end that event shaped who I am as person and how I live this life.